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2018年3月15日雅思写作真题回顾

  Task 1

  题型柱状图,静态图

  题目男性女性一周内做家务的百分比和小时数

  The percentage and exact time(weekly)males and females spent on

  house tasks in 2010 of a country.

  共有四种家务类别,分别是:cooking meal,cleaning,caring pets,

  house repair

  具体数据未知

  Task 2

  话题分类政府类

  题目Many country invest money to prepare competitors to join top

  competitions like Olympic Game and the World Cup. It is necessary

  to offer money to encourage children to exercise. To what extent do

  you agree or disagree?

  参考范文

  Many countries are investing more in pulling for the children’s exercise in order to promote competitor’s fostering. Some people embrace the phenomenon, while others side against this. Personally, my preference goes to the former notion.

  Indeed, it is understandable why many oppose it. Spending money to encourage children to take exercise will distract their attention from study. The time children can spend is established. If they involve themselves in exercising further,they have to cut down the energy and time on study. It is reported that more children prefer to exercise because exercise can make them relaxed and they can play with the peers. Exercise encouragement among children can definitely result in study time occupation.

  Although the stance sound plausible,I still insist that the progress of encouraging juveniles to exercise should not be curbed. The primary reason for this is that physical condition of children can be improved. More equipment for entertainment are facilitated at home, leading to the young generation’s lacking physical excises and sedentary life. More investment in exercise encouragement, such as building more sport fields and setting up scholarship for these positive young sport participants, would render activity joining more attractive.

  Furthermore, more potential and competitive athletes can earn more prizes in top competitions. More money spent on fostering competitors can cultivate lots of potential sportsmen. Government’s inclination means stronger supporting in professional equipment and training. And changing social bias that exercising is not an achievement is another bonus. Both these benefits will make children devote themselves to exercising and have more possibilities to access to great prizes in great competitions.

  To sum up, I do not deny that exercise encouragement among young generation will bring about learning time occupation. However, I still believe we should take into consideration the healthy condition enhancing of the children and more possibilities in gaining prizes in competitions.


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